The Crimson Uchiha

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Chapter 6 "First love"

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Naruto's POV I opened my eyes and real space opened up before my eyes. With millions of stars, huge moons and a giant purple planet with 3 rings. I was dismayed by this appearance. I had never seen anything like this in my life, I was lying on some soft green grass, I felt quite comfortable. I was prepared to spend hours looking at each of the 30 satellites or each of the infinite stars. But all this delight was interrupted by just one thought, which was that I should now sleep. Accordingly, I had to end up in the sewer. But instead of this I ended up here. I got up and started looking around. I was in some clearing, and now it was night, but with millions of stars and a bunch of moons that reflected the rays of the sun. So it was quite light. But even so, there were hundreds of thin pillars on which there were torches. It is also worth noting that many rivers were visible here that led to the sea, which was covered with whirlpools that glowed with a blue light. I also saw a large house dotted with various lanterns with a whirlpool pattern. And looking around, I also saw Kurama sleeping peacefully on the grass and next to him was Mito. I immediately went to them. And Mito saw me and smiled at me. - Well, do you like how I changed everything here? “She asked me, still smiling. I was stunned to learn that she did it. Now I only had one question. How did she do it? - Baa-chan, of course I like it, but how did you do it? — I was honestly sincerely interested in how she achieved this. — I just edited the seal. - Mito smiled, clearly proud of herself. - Wow! Can you remove the seal? “I asked her a question hoping for a positive answer. - No. Unfortunately, I won't be able to do this. Without the seal, Kurama's Chakar will flow into you uncontrollably, adapting your body to the new force. And now, although your body is adapted to containing the tailed creature within itself, it is absolutely not ready to accept your power. That’s why I was against you breaking the seal, since Kurama’s power could simply kill you. But you are very lucky. With the fact that your chakra was able to curb, even if only a tiny bit, the power of Kurama. And even if you were ready for Kurama’s power, I still wouldn’t be able to free Kurama. The seal only allows you to make it so that the fox cannot contact you mentally and also does not allow you to release too much chakra. But the fox himself is held not by a seal, but by a cage, and from it he needs a key, which I don’t have. — Mito explained to me. I decided to stop asking questions and, lying down on the grass, I began to look at the beautiful cosmic landscape. **The next day.** I woke up in a great mood, because today I will learn elemental techniques. I got out of my bed and after making it, I headed to the bathroom to wash my face and brush my teeth. When I finished everything, I went to the kitchen where Yuji was already sitting, with a dissatisfied face, while drinking pickle straight from the jar. From his appearance everything was already clear. He got drunk again and could not overcome the Hangover, fortunately his faithful ally, the brine, always helped him out and healed him after a difficult battle with alcohol. - Yuji-san. More and more often it seems to me that you are an alcohol swindler. You drink for any reason, it even seems to me that you don’t care what the reason is for drinking. For you, the very fact of getting drunk is already a serious argument. And at this rate, constant intoxication will sooner or later bring you to the pro level and then you will have to fight against the Slug Princess for the title of the best. — I decided to tease Yuji. - Oh Naruto. You are right about one thing, I will indeed become a pro, but I will not fight for the title of the best drunk. I don't need this, so what's wrong with your hair? — Yuji asked a question that slightly surprised me. - What's wrong with them? — I asked a question that interested me. -Did you paint them? - Yuji answered. Without understanding what he was talking about, he went to the mirror and saw that the ends of my hair were purple. Why was there no limit to surprise? So, not really surprised by this, I told Yuji that my hair was changing color. Most likely this is due to the fact that during the attack by the Masker, I released Kurama’s chakra and, apparently, it mixed my genes and, apparently, the genes of my great-grandmother awakened in me. I asked Yuji when will I start learning elemental techniques? I asked Yuji a question. — Before we start studying elemental techniques, you need to find out what elements you have. And for this you need to learn how to move your chakra through your body, so here’s a piece of paper, you need to make it stick to your forehead, with the help of chakra. And then you can learn to control your chakra. “Yuji gave me a leaf that he picked from a tree, then he put it on his forehead and removed his hand, and according to all the laws of gravity, the leaf fell to the ground. I decided to sit in the lotus position and begin to disperse the chakra and try to bring it to my forehead. **Shisui's POV** I, along with other ANBU, were following a jinchuriki whose name was Naruto. Wait for the information that I owned I could tell that this is a very purposeful child. He is clearly interested in the Shinobi craft. I didn’t find any hatred towards the village in him. I was aware that he awakened his chakra source in just 9 hours, which was a very good result. I knew about his awareness that he was a Jinchuriki; he used his chakra only once when he was attacked by some Mommy from our clan. According to Yuji. The mask man looked about 16-17 years old. But even so, he created a huge stir among influential people. And now in the territory of the Uchiha clan there are more than 300 Shinobi from the Uchiha, Hyuga, Aburame, Nara, Yamanaka and Inuzuko clans. The elders deployed 1/3 of Konoha's standing army. They all have only one goal. Guard the Jinchuriki. I led a squad formed exclusively from Uchihas. Now I was watching the training of the young Jinchuriki. **After 3 hours** During this time, I completely learned to use my chakra. My leaf stuck perfectly to my forehead. Yuji seeing my success. Rushing my hair, he led me to the training ground. - And so Naruto. Now you have learned to direct your chakra throughout your body, then it’s time to learn your elements. - Yuji said giving me 5 pieces of paper. - And what should I do with them? “I asked, looking into Yuji’s eyes. “Pour your chakra into these leaves, and by the way they change we will understand which ones.” you have the elements. - Yuji answered. I poured chakra into the leaf and just as Yuji told me. And the first leaf got wet, the second fell into dust and the third was covered with moss, nothing happened to the steel ones. - Naruto, you have the elements of Water, Earth and some kind of improved genome. You are very lucky, because you have an improved genome. Which is very rare. In our clan, only one person has the element of water. But I highly doubt that he will teach you. And I can teach you the elements of the Earth. And your improved genome will need to be searched in the Konoha archives. There is all the information about ever improved genomes. And for now, I will teach you defensive techniques, and first I will teach you the Earthen Wall technique - Yuji said showing me the seals and demonstrating the Earthen Wall technique and in front of him, a 2 by 3 meter wall grew out of the ground. I tried to repeat the technique, but it didn't work the first time. Then another and another try. And in the end, only after about 70 attempts it was possible to create a wall, only in size it was like an average plate. Then the attempts only continued. And after 3 hours of trying, I managed to create a mud wall with a radius of 2 by 2 meters. “Naruto, you’re clearly doing great, but there’s one thing.” You're wasting too much chakra. Your chakra reserve is 7 times greater than mine. And you should have been able to use this technique more than 1000 times. But you were only able to use this technique 70 times and you were already exhausted. This means only one thing. You have terrible chakra control. You are unable to control the amount of chakra. Because of which, at best, you spend all the chakra of an average Chunin on one weak technique. So in the near future you will train your chakra control and learn to distribute it correctly, but now let’s go into the house. You need to rest, and in a week I will begin teaching you a new technique. - Yuji said. After which we went into the house. **5 days later.** And for these 5 days all I did was create walls out of mud and improve chakra control while sitting in the lotus position for hours on end. And the success was worth it, because now I could use the Wall of Mud technique not 70 times as before, but already as much as 79 times. It may not sound like much, considering that with my chakra I have to summon about 1000 of these walls. But considering the chakra control I have, this result is very good. I was also very pleased that in 3 days, Yuji would teach me a new technique. Well, now I just continued to train. Along the way, experimenting with chakra volumes. And learn to change the size of my walls. But the more chakra I put into my technique, the more unsuccessful the wall turned out. Because my chakra was literally tearing apart a wall made of pure stone. And in the end I wasted my chakra. As a result, I had to learn to control the chakra released in huge quantities. And after practicing, I realized that my technique was unsuccessful due to the fact that the chakra always tends to go in all directions, and when it is compressed, the technique is obtained. Basically, a person does not feel this because he spends very little chakra on a technique, but I began to use a gigantic amount of chakra both because of my relatively weak chakra control and because of my young age. I am unable to control such a huge accumulation of chakra. And then an idea came to my mind. Instead of starting to direct all this chakra in one direction, I direct it in two opposite directions and only then move the chakra from these sides to the center. As a result, what I ended up with was not a wall, but some kind of sharp spike. In essence, I created a completely new technique. Which has a great advantage since its creation requires the same seals to how and for "Earth of Mud" but it only eats too much chakra. So I decided to invest about 90% of all my chakra. And having folded the seals to create a Wall of mud, I summoned a huge number of spikes that grew from the ground within a radius of 20 meters, and the closer to the center the higher and thicker the spikes. The size of the spikes started from 3 centimeters in height to 5 meters in height. I was very exhausted. But nevertheless, I was pleased with this result. After all, now if the Masker appears again, then now I had a chance to defeat him. I lay on the grass and closed my eyes, simultaneously greedily gulping in the cold air. Even through my closed eyes I saw the light, but then this light abruptly ended, I opened my eyes and saw in front of me a 13-year-old boy with black eyes and black hair. He extended his hand to me. To which I answered him by extending my hand to him. After which this guy helped me get up. - Hello, my name is Uchiha Shisui. I saw your success, and how do you feel about training together? I, as a race, master the element of water and can teach you a couple of techniques. — Po greeted Shisui, offering me joint training. And since I needed to learn water techniques, this Shisui was the best option for me at the moment. To which I naturally agreed. And we went to a new testing ground because the current one was not suitable for use. - What is your name? — Shisui asked me as we walked along the path to the training ground. - My name is Naruto Uchiha. — I answered, looking at the face of Shisui, who was 3 heads taller than me. -You know Naruto. You clearly have potential and genius is noticeable. I have only seen such successes from Itachi and Kakashi. — Shisui praised me. -Who are Itachi and Kakashi? “I asked with obvious curiosity. — Kakashi is the last member of the Hatake clan. He is now 17 years old. And Itachi is not he, but she. And she is now the same age as you. - Shisui answered. — What water techniques do you know? — I asked my question. - Well... Well, in fact, I only know 3 techniques, but believe me, each of them is good in its own way. - Shisui said and I began to change my face. - You only know 3 techniques! Are you kidding! Why so few! - I was perplexed. To which Shisui smiled sheepishly. - Well, actually, it doesn’t matter how many elements you know. For example, Kakashi knows more than 500 techniques, but he still somehow defeats me. The main thing here is that you have the intelligence to use them correctly. And by the way, about techniques. What were these thorns? This is the first time I have seen such a technique. — Shisui answered and asked me. — I came up with this technique myself. “I answered proudly to Shisui, who was clearly surprised, and shock was visible in his eyes. “You Naruto really are a genius, okay, we’re already here.” — Shisui praised me while talking about our arrival at the training ground where I immediately noticed a girl my age who was throwing Shurikens at targets. - Oh Itachi, hello! Meet my new friend - Po greeted Shisui, showing me with his hand. - Greetings. My name is Itachi Uchiha, nice to meet you. — She greeted, bowing at the same time as a sign of respect. I also bowed back and introduced myself. Itachi was a little taller than me, she had raven hair and jet black eyes. One could drown in them. She was slim and... Beautiful. Shisui began training both of us. He said a lot of things that he said that successfully flew past my ears. All my attention was focused on Itachi. When I looked at her, unable to take my eyes off, everything was shrouded in pitch darkness, and the only source of light was Itachi, or when she began to speak in her angelic voice, it was as if I was deaf, and the only thing I could hear was Itachi’s speech . I wanted to be with her forever. I felt better than ever with her. If Drugs make you feel very good and become very addictive, and when you stop taking them you feel extremely bad. Then in that case, my drug is Itachi. Which I will never be able to refuse for the life of me. This day was going just fine. It was definitely on par with the day I started living with Yuji. But unfortunately this day came to an end when I was completely exhausted, and Shisui took me by the back. He carried me home, and Itachi said goodbye to us and went to her house. I was able to learn the water technique. Called Water Jet. But I didn't care. Although this is exactly why I agreed to train with Shisui. Right now all I could think about was Itachi. For some reason she took up all the space in my head, not allowing other thoughts the right to exist. Without noticing it, I fell asleep on Shisui's back. And as usual, I woke up in my subconscious, but even so I didn’t go anywhere and just continued to look into the void and think about Itachi. - Hee-hee. It seems my grandson has fallen in love. - Mito said smiling. - What! No! Never! I don't need all this nonsense. “I started to deny it and tell what seemed to me the truth. - Hee-hee. You can't fool your heart. You know, she's a very beautiful girl, no wonder you fell in love with her. — Mito continued to tease me. But I just had to agree with her, already understanding that any arguments with her were useless.
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